Hi,
Sorry to say but I really don't think either one "looks" right. I can't put my finger on it, it may be the forward sloping of the first one, and the second one I think the letters are too spaced and they just don't "look right".
I know how hard it is to do logos, You can spend hours on 3 simple words.
IMHO, in English language anyway, anytime you talk about yourself and other in the same sentence or similar context, you put the other person first, or use words that place importance on the other person.
That's why in your logo, you have you: data medics, and the other person, the partner. It is why "Partner" is underlined and bigger... you want to convey that they are important to you. The ONLY means you have to do this is the single word, so you have to work with that in whatever way you can to do as I said above.
Here is a sample I played with.. not trying to convince you in any way of anything, just saying my personal opinion.
As in everything, ask 4 people and you get 4 opinions!
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